About The Forest
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Underestimating Kills Days before the war started, you could already feel the tension in the air. Each fighter had his own personal weapon forged by those of us who were skilled with weapon forging. No two weapons were the same. The blacksmiths were not the only ones kept busy. The city had the ocean at its back and there were already Sea Tribes preparing the defenses there. We placed runes at paths we thought the soldiers may tread one and planted traps at every river, mountain pass and even under bushes and rocks. Birds of every species patrolled the air and even the most common animals were spies for us. The only animals that refused to obey us were the tamed ones in the city. We could not rid the soldiers of their war horses or turn their hounds against them. They were far too loyal and afraid of their masters. We all did not doubt the city was making preparations. Our warriors were instructed not to harm women or children, should we succeed in pushing the humans back into their city, and we were to aim for the master of the Blood Warriors. All human warriors who willingly put down their arms were not to be harmed, merely imprisoned temporarily till the war ends. When all the preparations were done, we retreated to a mountain pass where we would ambush them while they marched past. Unfortunately, we had underestimated them. When they came through the mountain pass, we could clearly see they had fallen for some of our traps. Just when they all entered the mountain pass, those of us with wings swooped down from the back and ambushed them, just as we had planned. Everything went according to plan for approximately 5 seconds, and then it descended into chaos. The soldiers at the back alerted the soldiers in front the moment we attacked. I lead the charge for the winged ones. As expected, Blood Warriors attempted to attack us from above, but were met with other winged warriors. Warriors from the heavy-built land tribes like the Ox tribe streamed down the mountain and attacked the battalion from its sides. The plan was to take down as many as possible, and then escape to prevent too many deaths on our side. And we all thought we would succeed, until the soldiers pulled out weapons we had never seen in our lives. They had weapons that could fire small pellets at high speeds, appearing to be superior to our bows. They could shoot at a faster rate than us and took down a few of the winged ones I lead before we even reached them. Those skilled in archery had to hover just below the fighting above them and a distance away from the fighting below while dodging pellets and attempting to shoot at the correct person. It was a nightmare. With every soldier I brought down, there were three more to replace him. There were still soldiers in the battalion who used swords and I engaged those in battle. It took all my years of fighting and some luck to keep me from being killed. The cries of those who had fallen in battle rang in my head, serving to spur me on. Finally, we pulled out of the pass, casting a barrier while retreating, preventing any of their strange pellets from hitting us. The barrier was originally meant for arrows they might have shot at us, but it clearly worked against the pellets. Knowing the Blood Warriors would try to cut us down while we were escaping, Talon and I held them off. There were only five of them there, but it was like fighting ten of them. The warriors on land were having a hard time retreating, so I did the only thing I knew would work. Leaving Talon to fend the Blood Warriors off, I grabbed and flew over the battle below and dropped it at what seemed like the right spot, praying my memory had not failed me this time. The rock landed on a rune I had left uncompleted on the ground of the mountain pass. By hitting the ground, it made the last stroke, and completed the rune. A bright flash of light blinded everyone, temporarily stopping the battle and giving the warriors on land time to retreat. The light reached where Talon was fighting and blinded the Blood Warriors too. I used my wing to brush against him and led him to the point we were suppose to retreat to, flying solely by memory. When the light finally faded, we were glad to see that some of us had managed to survive. But too many had died and that itself could tip the balance of the war. We were all unused to death of this scale and we mourned the loss of our loved ones. Some of those who had fallen had come from Raven Tribe; they were people I knew when I was young, people I had played with or talked to, and now they were gone. Would it have been better if we had chosen to hide underground instead of fight? But if we had hidden, would the humans have tried to destroy our world? There were too many questions and regrets. That night, all the nearby tribes gathered together to mourn and to plan. We had underestimated our enemy today; we could not afford to do it again. There was no gossiping among us that night, no happy chattering of children who had no reason to listen to the meeting. We re-did some of our plans, and it was agreed that the children would be moved to an island cave that was far from these lands during the night itself. Suddenly, I recalled a memory of the elders telling stories during our past cheerful tribe meetings. They had mentioned something, a poem about a small rag doll that was supposedly imprisoned when its makers had deemed it too evil to live but yet too beautiful to die. But when I asked Talon to let me search for it, he refused. “Itzel, it was just a story, a poem told by the elders to scare us. Don’t look for it, it would be a wild goose chase and we would be losing our most valuable fighter.” That was his argument, yet, I saw a hint of fear in his eyes when the doll was mentioned, as though it really existed. That sparked my curiosity more than anything else, and led me to ask my old rune master about it over the next few days. Everyday brought a new battle which always led to more deaths than we could afford. Our warriors fought excellently, giving everything they had to throw off the enemy, but it was too little, too difficult. They were better equipped than us, and their numbers were greater than ours. It was as though they had recruited the entire male population in the city into the army. Finally, it was decided that we would use the Grave Rose seeds I had harvested and changed. Those that were not killed by the Grave Roses, we would kill. It was a long-shot, a plan we did not expect to work, but we did it all the same. We planted seeds everywhere, either by dropping them while flying over the land the army would march over next or by walking around and randomly throwing seeds at places we thought the army may walk over. At night while the soldiers were asleep, animals were sent to destroy as many weapons as possible or bring them to us. Especially the weapons we found out were called guns. “Looks like tomorrow is going to be a long day,” I muttered to myself. Not my favourite or best written chapter :/ - Wolf Wednesday, February 16, 2011
Plans and Strategies “Master, a warrior named Evan sent after the tribe girl has been reported dead. His location of death is unknown. The tracking charm is most probably being blocked by stronger magic and only the animal tribes are capable of doing this,” a robed messenger bowed low as he reported the results of the latest hunt. He braced himself for his master’s anger and the blow that usually came with it. He was not disappointed. His body was run through with a thousand spears, the pain unbearable and felt as though his body was being burned with the flames of hell. He screamed in agony as the spears withdrew from his body slowly, one by one. Blood gushed out like a fountain, staining the already red carpet, turning it a dark crimson shade. Just as the last drop left him, he found himself still bowing to his master, his body unscathed with not a single scratch on him. But the memory of the pain was all too real. “Perhaps this will prove to you how strong my magic is. The animal tribes are nothing but some primitive fools who refuse to relinquish their land and their magic is no better than ours. Do not give me excuses for your worthlessness.” The master glared coldly at him. “Y-Yes Sire. My apologies Sire,” the messenger trembled and left the room, hands checking his chest but finding no wound. The wound may not exist, but the pain he experienced was definitely real, he could even feel a slight ache in his chest still. He retreated to the research laboratory to continue his attempt to track the body of the dead warrior. His master was best not angered a second time. Uziel swore loudly and paced back and forth in the room. A hundred years had passed and yet, he still had not succeeded in purging this world of the tribes. It was also impossible to increase the city to more than its current size due to whatever protective runes the tribes had secretly placed around the city. The ground became hard and it was impossible to build things when they tried to expand. A small buzzing sound came from a wide screen behind him. He swung round and saluted to the figure on the screen just as it turned on. “Sir! I have devised a plan to take over this world as an addition to our empire.” He told the person on the screen after they had gone through the formalities. “Oh? And what is this brilliant plan of yours?” The figure was a man who appeared not to have distinctive features. His hair, eye colours could not be told by looking at him. They seem to be subtly changing colour in a way that made their colours impossible to determine. It was also somewhat impossible to tell his age. “We will bring in modern weapons from other worlds and imbue magic of this world into them to improve their abilities. The tribes would be unable to counteract as from my experience, they have no idea there are weapons more powerful than magic,” Uziel stated. It was a simple plan but required a lot of resources. “Your idea is accepted but you may not take more than a hundred soldiers from our army and should your plan fail…well you better hope your plan doesn’t fail.” At that, the screen blinked off and Uziel was left to gather his troops. I will win this war, I will win and I will show all the worlds the power I have at my hands. He glanced at the screen, determined not to let anything get in his way. The sound of drum beats rang loudly in the air, and the carefree melody of the wind flutes wove in and out of the steady rhythm mixed with the soul-warming tunes from the conch shells. Children from all tribes played different games with each other and some competed against each other to see who could draw the best runes. Adults gathered to boast about their latest accomplishments and elders shared old stories and reminisced the times before the City appeared. Finally, the meeting started and everyone gathered round the fire to share the latest stories about the lands they live at. As usual, the Sea Tribes started first, reporting the activity of their individual sea creature and whether their part of the sea had been investigated by city folks lately. The salmon tribe claimed more and more humans were coming to catch salmons, decreasing the chance the salmon had to lay their eggs. The Land Tribes went next. They reported humans exploring more of the territory around the city and further into the wilderness. This was worrying as most of us were even against them building a city originally. The city was founded about a hundred years ago and while most of us could live up to 200 years old, we found that those of us living closer to the city died younger. As a result, we moved further away from the city, placing runes to prevent the city from growing further. Next were the Sky Tribes. The skies and mountainous region was still untouched by humans as most of them found it difficult to scale the steep sides and while we laughed at the idea of them ever developing machines that allowed them all to fly, we noted that more Blood Warriors used wings nowadays. Suddenly, the Rat Tribe Chieftain stood up, discussions around the fire stopped as we all waited for him to speak. “Friends, last night our spies from the city reported back to us. They said the Blood Warriors’ master is planning to open a portal to another world to obtain weapons we have no knowledge of and they plan to ambush us and wipe us out.” Cries of disbelief rang out from all sides. Clearly, this news had caused a huge uproar. This was the very thing we feared when we let them built their city and allowed them to live. “Friends, friends. Calm down. We are all well adept in the art of rune crafting and we’re also blessed with abilities from our animal counterparts. Even if other weapons are brought in and a war is started, chances are, we’ll win. Or we’ll at least be able to hold out longer than them.” A member of the Oxen Tribe had bellowed this to calm everyone down. The loud buzz of conversations and protest died down, some nodded their heads in agreement with the Ox Tribe. I stood at the sidelines watching the meeting progress as we started to plan our counter attack and different strategies to either raze the city or simply scare the inhabitants away. The next few years are sure to be interesting. I felt slight amusement despite the gravity of the situation. I lost track of the chapter numbers :( (Good or Bad?) - Wolf Monday, February 7, 2011
Take A Break Eira joined us some time mid-flight, her crest had stopped glowing and the snow was already beginning to melt. It was a short flight to Talon’s tribe but the pain from my wounds slowed me down and made the distance seem like a few miles. When we reached the Hawk Tribe, their healers helped me bandage my wounds and put runes of restoration on the bandage. Dalia, the healer in charge and Talon’s mother, ordered me to avoid vigorous exercise for the next few days till my wounds healed. Knowing how fierce and strict she could be, I agreed, thankful she had not ordered me to stay in bed. I wandered around the tribe, recalling memories of spending countless hours as a child here. “These are the basic runes you’ll be learning today…” The sound of a rune master’s teachings drifted towards me. I went over to observe the children, having nothing to do. Runes were quite simple to use, they were just symbols that channeled the world’s energies. For example, using a rune of heat would be directing the energy of any fire or source of heat to the rune. As the world had lava running below its surface, the energy would be gathered from there. A rune of cooling would be directing energy away from the rune. Runes would disappear over time, depending on how well they were drawn. The children were practicing drawing the rune of heat to boil a pot of water. It was quite simple, three wavy vertical lines side by side to represent steam. One of them was having trouble with the rune; she kept drawing the lines too straight. I stooped down beside her and drew the rune into the sand next to her pot, showing her how to draw a perfect heat rune. The better the rune was drawn, the more effective it was. She copied the rune into the sand, a fierce concentration on her face. Drawing a circle around the symbol, she completed the rune as she had been taught. She anxiously put her pot of water on it, clearly thinking her rune would fail or at best, heat the water only slightly. I felt simple joy fill me when I saw her face light up in astonishment and triumph at succeeding in the drawing of the rune. She must have thought I was her rune master, as she almost fell over when she realized it was a stranger who had helped her. Blushing, she murmured her thanks, making me smile in reply. Looking up, I saw her rune master glance at us and give me a nod of acknowledgement. He knew me. Of course he did. He was my old rune master and was familiar with those of us from Raven Tribe, having come from there himself. His name was Skylar. There was something different about him though, he had no wings. I left the temporary school yard and crossed over to where my pigeon was being kept. There were stories that said he once travelled across many worlds, learning different forms of magic and rune casting from all of them. At the end of his journey however, a payment for all the knowledge he had learnt was demanded and he paid in the form of his wings. When we were young, most of us thought the stories to be true, but we were too frightened to ask him. I chuckled at the memories of fear the stories had struck us with when we first heard them. The pigeons here had a forest for them to roost in. The forest itself was amazing, considering the tribe was located on a mountain and the forest was in a cave. The forest consisted of many different species of birds and animals. Most of the animals from nearby tribes stayed here as the forest had a certain feeling of home to them. It was the same with the tribes, we all felt at peace in the forest. The cave was huge and it was possible to get lost in the forest. Whistling a simple birdcall, I called Eira in our own language that was a mix of pigeon and raven. Eira called back and flew to my arm, pecking me on my head playfully. I laughed and tickled her crest. I heard Talon’s pigeon call out and an answering call came from behind me. I spun around and was amused to see his pigeon let out a small flame attempt to burn his hair. He winced and puffed air at the pigeon. His pigeon was a drought-pigeon, it had exactly the same properties as Eira but it caused a drought instead of a snowstorm. “Didn’t Mom say to avoid vigorous activities?” He raised an eyebrow at me, knowing the instructions Dalia had issued out. “In what way is greeting Eira considered vigorous?” I answered him. He snorted, clearly doubting that greeting Eira was all I came here to do. He was right though, I had come here to use a portal. That was another ability of my tribe; we could open portals easily without having to give anything in exchange. Our elders told us that in the past, ravens were messengers of Death and had to travel through many worlds. Thus, the ability was passed down to us and we now could pass through portals to travel either between worlds or great distances. Talon grinned at me. Suspicion bloomed the moment I saw him smile. Before I could get airborne, he pushed me into the lake behind me and took off towards his tribe. Growling in fake anger, I chased after him, the feeling of being free and away from any trouble filling me with a joy that I had not felt in a long time. Thursday, February 3, 2011
Lies Ice was starting to form at the edges of the cave entrance. The snow became heavier and Eira seemed extremely nervous. I pet her head and comforted her. “Amazing birds aren’t they, Weather birds? Snow birds especially. In this climate of ours, it’s much easier to tell when they’re trying to warn us.” I called out to the figure. Turning to face him, I jumped out through the roof escape, signaling to Talon to stay down. By the time the blood hunter reached the sky, the seed was already planted and vines had already grown around my blade. He flew into the sky, making sure to keep out of my sword’s range and drew his weapon, bow and arrows, as expected. I circled him on the ground, making sure not to stay in one spot longer than I have too. I slashed my blade at the air, completing the rune of repelling I placed on the hilt. Thorns shot from the vine, embedding themselves in the Blood Hunter’s crimson wings, causing the flower started to bloom faster. The thorns were still connected to the vines through tiny silver threads, allowing the flower to leach off the Hunter’s blood. He looked stunned for a moment before attempting to cut through the threads connected to my blade. Of course, I anticipated this and designed the thorns to produce a toxin capable of paralyzing. His wings became useless and forced him to land. Immediately, he drew an arrow and shot it in my direction. I barely dodged it, singeing my pants cuff. The arrow had runes of heat and warmth on the arrow head and fast flying. “So, you know my name. May I have the pleasure of knowing yours before I kill you?” I mocked him as I circled him to fire more thorns at him. He shot more arrows in my direction in quick succession. “I am Evan, best Archer of my rank.” He announced. “You will die by my arrows dark mage.” This time, his arrows almost struck my arm and I was forced to use my blade to deflect the blade. The force of his arrow shattered the vines, causing them to rain down onto the thick snow blanket. Eira was really working hard. The half grown flower withered and I cursed my carelessness. “Your organization says imbuing runes into living this is dark magic, but if that is so, then your wings can be considered as dark magic.” I stated, indicating I knew the process of attaching wings to a person. “The master of the organization has sacrificed their souls for the sake of the kingdom. They know we have to counteract dark magic with dark magic, even though they dislike this decision,” He sounded so sure, as though that was the reason they used dark magic. All the animal tribes knew the truth; the organization just despised the animal tribes for our unique traits and would like nothing more than to eliminate us. They called us soulless creatures and spread rumours that we traded our souls for different animal abilities and said our ability to imbue runes into living objects was a form of dark magic. Since they trained their warriors from young, this was impressed upon them heavily. I charged towards him, new seeds already growing on my blade. By the time I reached him, the vines had fully grown already. My sword was aimed to slash his wrist. Suddenly, he pulled out a sword and defended himself. We exchanged blows, me trying to deal a fatal blow, him trying to maim me to make the task of bringing me back to the city easier. Being smaller in size, I could dodge his attacks, but my slashes were light compared to his. He moved surprisingly fast for someone his size. I moved around him to attack his back but he easily defended. He had many slashes over his arms but they all were shallow cuts. I had only two gashes, one on my arm and the other on my hip. They dripped blood and pain slowed my movements. I was tiring faster, how long more would I be able to keep this up, I wondered to myself. In an act of recklessness, I dashed towards him and put as much strength into that blow as possible. He saw a chance and raised his blade for the final blow, but it was too late. The rose bloomed and it released its sweet addictive fragrance along with its deadly seeds. Evan must have been warned about this, he held his breath and jumped back to avoid breathing in the seeds. But I had foreseen this. This was a different variant of the Glass Rose; its vines could sprout anywhere as long as there was warmth. And right now, Evan was definitely warmer than the environment. The seeds sprouted on the slashes I made and it was impossible for him to get rid of them. Within seconds, he was encased in vines and a single rose grew from it. White with a tint of blue. Evan truly believed what he was told by the masters of the organization, thinking he was helping the city by eliminating what they considered dark mages. How innocent in so many ways I thought as I bent down to take the rose. Talon came out of the cave and glanced at the body. “We can hide that in one of the numerous caves around. No one would be able to find him. We should clean you up,” He helped me onto my feet and flew with me to his tribe. 6th chapter. Any comments? - Wolf
“If you’re referring to the letter I received about being employed as a protector, then yup!” I still could not believe I was employed.
“Well there was never any doubt you’d be employed as either a protector or a healer considering your talents”
“I did make something explode in your face, you know.”
“Small mistake,” Una replied, chuckling at the memory. “It was funny and smelt nice anyway. Come on, let’s go meet the others!”
She dashed off again towards the meeting point, the pavilion in the middle of the employment center’s garden. I sighed and chased after her, I forgot how much energy Una had.
As the pavilion came into view, so did four other strangers. One of them appeared to have wings although not pure white. It was more of an ash grey tone. He was clearly a half-angel. Una had already reached and was waiting for her to catch up. Using a final burst of speed, I reached there within seconds.
“Ah. Welcome Althea, Una. I see you’ve both received my letter. Good. These three others will be your new team members. Enfys, Nuriel and Keior. Keior will be your leader,” The older man who was clearly the one in charge gestured to the three others standing around. “You five will be guarding the new school that has been built. A house has been provided near the school for all of you to live in. You will receive a monthly payment of five thousand gold a month. I will leave you all to get acquainted now. Here is the address.” With that, the man dressed in a black suit turned and left, pressing a small piece of paper into Keior’s hands.
Una, with her usual friendliness, started the introductions. “I’m Una and this is Althea. She’s a healer and an alchemist. I’m a telepath but not the usual kind.” I mumbled something about not being that good an alchemist.
“I’m Nuriel and as you all can see, I’m a half-angel but everyone says my angel half is only in my appearance.” Nuriel gave a slight bow in a joking manner.
“That’s cause you’re constantly playing pranks on people.” Toshie retorted.
“Poor Toshie, no sense of humor at all.” Nuriel smiled at her sweetly.
“If I find any more of those bubble mines you created, I’ll give you an illusion so terrible you won’t be able to sleep for weeks.” Toshie hissed. “Now let Keior introduce himself.”
“I’m Keior and all of you are expected to move in by tomorrow. We start in two days.” Keior sounded sour and gave no hint of his abilities at all.
“And what might your abilities be?” I inquired politely, curiosity getting better if me. Annoyance shot through me when he ignored my question and walked off.
“I hope his leadership skills are better than his hearing,” Toshie muttered to no one in particular.
“Looks like Toshie may have some sense of humor after all!” Nuriel exclaimed with feigned surprise. Toshie attempted to throw a punch at Nuriel but he took to the skies and hovered there. They continued to exchange insults for the next half hour. Una and I couldn’t resist laughing. The two of them definitely knew each other from before. Unnoticed by everyone else, Nuriel kept throwing uneasy glances in Keior’s direction.
It didn’t take us long to find the new house. It did, however, take us a long time to decide on which rooms we wanted. The house had two floors and a basement. The second floor had five bedrooms each with a connecting bathroom, which meant one bedroom per person. Two of them overlooked the forest in front of the house while the other three faced the backyard. The backyard consisted of a huge garden and a swimming pool. Keior took a room facing the forest. None of us felt like arguing with him; it felt like icy waves were perpetually rolling off him. He barely spoke to us and when he did, it was only to tell us we had an hour to settle in before a group meeting downstairs regarding our job. All of us, save Una, wanted the room remaining room facing the forest. In the end, it was decided that Nuriel will take the room. It seemed more practical as he pointed out that if he spotted any intruders he could easily use angelic magick to warn us.
I took the room nearest to the stairs. The room was sparsely decorated. It had a single bed, a desk and a drawer. There were clean sheets and towels in the drawer. The bathroom had a rain shower although there was no bathtub to my slight disappointment. Soaking in a bathtub would be appealing during winter. I spent the free time exploring the house. The first floor had a living room, a dining room and a kitchen. The basement was empty and bare it could hardly be called dark, bright lights were installed in the basement to prevent it from giving a typical basement storage impression. I found Una in the garden examining the soil.
“Will you be planting anything?” Una loved plants and in my opinion, had a green thumb.
“Of course! I can already imagine the garden full of flowers! Would you like me to help you plant anything?”
“Just a few basic herbs. I doubt I’ll be creating any fancy potions. I haven’t had any success with personal recipes anyway.” I winced at the memory of my past experiments.
“Sure. But don’t give up, you’ll succeed one day.” Una replied sympathetically.
I gave a shrug and watched her for a while longer. “C’mon meeting is starting soon. Don’t wanna be late the first time round.” She gave a slight nod and followed me to the dining hall. Our dear leader was already seated at the head of the table waiting for everyone to gather. Toshie was seated to his right, Una and I took our seats opposite her on Keior’s left.
“Just like that dratted bird to be late,” Toshie muttered under her breath.
“Try knocking on his door,” I suggested.
“It’s ok. We’ll wait for him,” Keior said quietly.
I took the chance to observe Enfys and Keior. Toshie had silky hazelnut brown hair that reached her shoulders. Her eyes were almost like that of a cat’s and were green with flecks of gold. She was slightly taller than me and carried an air of confidence.
Keior could hardly be called muscular but he gave an impression that if he wanted, he could be stronger than even those bulkier than him. His eyes were smoky-grey and cold. Even now when we were gathered for a meeting, it was clear he wanted to be left alone.
“Hey everyone,” Nuriel entered the room, bright as usual. He looked like how some people used to imagine Angels to be. Being a half-Angel, he did not have as much “Shine” as they did. His hair was bright, golden blond and he had baby blue eyes. Angels with Shine are most of the time too bright to see, no one has yet to determine an Angel’s actual appearance. “I was taking a test flight around the house, the school is a short walk down one of the forest paths. Other than that, it’s a full five Talsi surrounding the house.”
“Well it says in the contract that all five acres is ours,” Keior stated. “We are to attend this school and protect its students from all harm. The strategy is up to us.”
“The area we’re in is known to have a lot of attacks isn’t it?” I asked, not altogether familiar with this part of the country.
“Yes. But we are not to reveal ourselves to the students. They must not know who their Protectors are.”
“We’re not protecting ordinary students are we? We’re protecting the monster spawn from our own species.” Disbelief was clear in Una’s tone. Kieor gave a slight nod. Gasps were heard all round the table. Hatred shone in her eyes, “Protect them? I’d rather massacre all of them. Better to rid the world of a few more demons. Why should we protect their children when they are always hunting ours? Have you forgotten how they breed? They steal our children and inject their essence into them. A few days of suffering and suddenly they too change into a monster. All their human memories are wiped clean and they grow up as monsters.”
“Good. Any other objections? No? Well, we’ll spend the rest of the days practicing our abilities.” And so ended our first meeting.
This took me awhile to do. Blame blogger for any weird, huge, random spaces (which were actually black text blending in with the background). Anyway, I'm trying to do a complete a story for once, but I might end up stopping halfway for various reasons. Oh well, just have to see where this leads to. Comments please! It would be especially helpful if comments are more specific than just "nice" and please tell me when the plot line gets cliche. Thanks! :D - Wolf
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